Pick one for me!
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- atomica0
I agree with most of the comments here, there's too much going on and too much confusion, not to mention the unconventional size of it..... would that fit comfortably in my wallet if you gave it to me? I think you just need to structure and organize it a little better, handle the type a bit more.....maturely? Something.... I see good potential in it though....
- Blofeldt0
I don't like either.
I think the 3D hexagons and orange is just soooo 1998.
I agree with everyone else about the amount of URL's. Very confusing.
I also reckon it's good to have all your contact details and name on one side in case a marketing type sticks your card into a rollerdex. I think the type should be reasonably big in case you hand your card to someone in a pub or somewhere dimly lit, and also reasonably strong contrast.Pump in the UK can mean fart, so i'm not keen on your URL, but I guess you won't be doing much over here anyway.
I don't like the stong horizontal line on the back, you don't use it on the front so why use it on the back.
Basically, I think you should:
Change the colour.
Play down the logo
Put all your contact stuff on one side.
Treat the other side as more of an arty space.
Sort out one URL.Oh, yeah and it doesn't look anything like your pump media holding page.
- woodyBatts0
I have to agree. I kept thinking pump == pumpkin, etc etc, I kept trying to make that connection in my head.
I think the biggest thing is that you have to many divisions on the card, and your type sits within these divisions, rendering it static. Maybe you can over lap the divisions or something. Also those comment lines only speak to people who comment out flash, being that comment taggs in HTML and Javascript are different, I definitely suggest taking them out.
No hate baby, nothin but Love, just want you to be happy woith your creation.
- Bunkum0
Not liking neither, sorry. Humble Suggestion: Look at your typography. Maybe put image on one side and all your type of the other so people arent flipping over all the time. I go now. :)
- MrBixler0
Kak
- GmbH0
actually i kinda get the feeling that only the orange bit is the card.
in which case, its just a normal card format.