Logo crit

• effeuelle

  it's for an italian speaker,
  his name is francesco discolo..

  damn, it's my first logo, so give a critique about!

  

  thanks,

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• rasp0

  looks like aj.

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• rasp0

  infact if you hadn't of said his name id have not even noticed the second letter was supposed to be a j

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• ILuvSushi0

  Maybe I'm wrong but I think the logo needs work.

  I would try to convey his profession more in the Identity.

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• REDWOOD0

  there is a kink between the 2 big rounds and the radius of the ball at the right side is to big. You haven't finished yet but it's a good start.

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• effeuelle0

  thanks to all,
  i'll come back to work_

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