feedback, please
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- canuck
hey guys can I get some feedback on this pro bono site I am working on. They need a simple template style site that they can update themselves.
http://www.alexcleary.com/d1.htm…
thanks
- canuck0
*bump*
- lilbabyleg0
shrink the logo, or redesign it... it sticks out like a sore thumb... site looks clean and easy to navigate.
- bug0
I agree with the logo comment, and also maybe try moving the copy out of the image and down to the empty green space at the bottom, but obviously make it white...just a thought, might not work.
- lukiri0
Hi. I agree with previous comments but I also think the menu items on top are too big. I don't think they need to stick out so much. Reducing them will create more space too which will make it look less busy. Looks easy to navigate though. Hope that helps.
- JamesEngage0
Is that Verdana? Never liked Verdana at a big size.. just a personal thing though I guess.
- l_articia0
hi there
i think the "preservation & protection" could be kerned in a little more? i'm not sure why the verdana is bugging me there, your menu looks great i think, however the type is a bit huge.
i would go with a font that's a little less bold. a magazine type font, which this is... sort of like a zine right?
nice choice for top greenery...
- canuck0
thanks for your comments, they all make sense.
- magicpatch0
it doesnt do anything
- lilbabyleg0
looks better...
- mikotondria20
Yeah, looks nice, though I'd agree that u just need to fiddle with the typography a little.
Maybe try Georgia for a serifed font, or something starker like DIN..
Possibly play with some subtle gradients at the top and the bottom of the main picture to give the architecture a little depth..
As for the logo, I'd take it off the white background and make it all white, but I konw clients can get antsy about their precious logos, lol :).
Overall I really like it... :)