need a crit
need a crit
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- frankNbeans0
It looks good. The only thing that I can pick out is that the torn edges are too severe. Nice work.
- brundlefly0
you need that ZING color, the primaries are there though
- abizzyman0
mmmm... zing... gotcha... and agree.
- abizzyman0
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- Soler0
Torn edges are nice I think, but that photo is weak- Not enough color although the sun shine is cool, too lo-res and not enough contrast or color in photo- Overall good layout though
- trooperbill0
its really nice but i REALY hate the way youve mashed the text into the right hand scrolly bit - that SUX big style - the image is less important than the text, surely?
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