crits are the new pink
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- sexypixel0
is that a pubic hair on top?
The layout is good, i think the drop shadow is to strong, and the black text on the beige background is a bit muddy
- Abandoned0
yeah it's suppose to resemble a lift tickt, so the black txt and the beige is is the "disclaimer box"
- vespa0
not sure about the right aligned text.
- ILuvSushi0
Im not sure on the news font it really clashes with the font on the top which i assume may be the logo?
- Abandoned0
yeah that's a good point, I didn't even notice.... it's like 5am
- sexypixel0
ah, ok. maybe make it perferated or something. I like the design quotes in the news box
- Abandoned0
yeah I was thinking about dirty'n up the edges make'n it more ratty, and then adding a clip
- bomy_dick0
what's the yellow bar doing there ?
- Duane0
i don't think the lift ticket look is paying off. push it. right now, the yellow bar just looks out of place. if this is actual size, maybe think about adding the metal hanger on the lift ticket.
