logo crit
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- zoiks
sorry for the repeated post, but I should have named my post better the first time. (I HATE "logo crit).
- stewart0
logo is way to soft.
what is the business?
- brundlefly0
agreed the wings/leaves are too soft...
but you'll get it.
- _niko0
what is this logo for?
aviation club?
aviation/library?
aviation/botony club?
aviation/butterfly club?
- 4cY0
eh
- zoiks0
It's for the title "failure is rampant"
not really a business. just a word concept that needs a logo at the moment.
- Really0
Draw a picture with one color does not make a logo!
- stewart0
4cy,
do you remember the DOA (Dead On Arrival) logo by some dutch designers?
(75b, dept, caulfield - don't remember exactly)that was a nice logo with a crashing airplane!
- zoiks0
"Draw a picture with one color does not make a logo! "
Mr. Really, cut me down doesn't make you a sense.
- zoiks0
thanks for the advice people!
- tara|gee0
asthetically i like 2..but im not sure id read it as a plane in a flower unless i saw the others... and im not sure if it says failure is rampant to me at all. it looks really peaceful...
- _niko0
to me, butterflies and planes and flowers do not convey the concept of "failure is rampant"
how do those images relate to that title?
maybe i'm just too dense to make the conection...
- zoiks0
To Mr. Really:
I apologize for the rude post... I'm a little edgy today and should have held my tongue/fingers.
I appreciate your respose...
- brundlefly0
I would start again, the plane is good, you just have to rethink the swooshiness factor
oh and...
Mr. really, the very definition of a logo should be a one colour watermark, or at least able to be used as one, not a multicoloured bevelled photoshop etc etc file....
:P
- Really0
thats clearly bullshit brundlefly...
- brundlefly0
yeah you're right
multi levelled photoshoppy bevelled logos are best
- zoiks0
brovo stewart... Thanks
I will make sure I rip that one real good... ;)
just kidding
- magicpatch0
the direction / shapes are nice, although i think the positive and negative space are conflicting, take a few moments to figure out what it is... best bet to strip it down, and keep it minimal
- tymeframe0
really cranky :[
i like #2 - it's pretty close to the DOA thing tho.