critique -- logo
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- rasko40
looks like an illustration not a logo. logo(type).
no idea what its for. looks too complicated for a logo.
- mirola0
what's it for? looks very complicated
- ********0
clutter.
- phirschybar0
if this ever gets shrunk down on print, it will look confusing
- JamesEngage0
Isn't that a drawin'?
- stewart0
i can't see anything when i click that hyperlink.
- Bunkum0
It's a cool illustration but thye're right, you're going to loose a heap of detail at small sizes. Tip o' the Day: Start in Black and White.
- rasp0
pap
- stewart0
ah, there it is.
looks like a logo for an African Jembe Player band.
- Raind0g0
Simplify, simplify, simplify. -- When I design a logo, I always keep in mind what it's going to look like printed on a pen - small size, one color. -- As an illustration, it's OK, but as a logo - you have ways to go.
- lnu0
If anything i could say that the necks of the guitars should be straight all the way down.
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- meok0
simplify
- lnu0
- Bunkum0
You could use this as part of their identity (like for packaging or something) and then use bits of it for the logo. An identity doesn't have to be just a logo (look at Abbey - there's barely anything there).
- yahoooo0
whos abbbey ?
- fusion410
What was the name of that japanese metal band?
Sarabelis or something?
I agree to confusing. Think geometric.

