need crit plz
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- yellowant
Want to get some feed back.
(^_^) Thanks
- r_gaberz0
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g. blurlayout (second column)
- mitsu0
i like the colors - splash page i presume?
- radar0
why the seperation into 3 columns - any reason.
I think it would work better if you integrated the image and the patterns more.
Both are strong visuals though.
- yellowant0
thanks.
It's not a spash page... just doing something o kill my time here..It's an Iban(one of borneo island natives) traditional motif inspired piece.
Thnking of using traditional design mix with contemporary layout. The spiral motif usually symbolize plants/trees in the jungle.. and Iban believe there's spirits living in the jungle and one have to repect them.
just trying to express that..
(^_^)
- D70
I would remove the thick white borders.
- industry730
the pattern on the far right, make that a dark green (looks black) if it is already green maybe lighten it up so it does not look as black
- tomkat0
luvlee..
- gcabral0
remove white borders and make pattern white to match the small symbol. play off that to make the eye move around the piece.