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- liquid
http://www.kleinfeldbridal.com/k…
this is a comp of whats to come......any suggestions.....comments.....
- blackspade0
niice, like the lil pattern movements on the right
no probs here :)
- smartK0
clean layout, the flash ani fits well for a wedding site .. nice
I don't like the buttons though, don't know why ...
- ********0
I can imagine the kind of clients youre working for but I'd try to show some diff. pictures.
Those pics really irritate me and make me not want to look at the site.
I'd give that piece of text in the middle bit some more space as the interlineage is a bit too much now... not very readable
- Mimio0
Nice job so far. I think the photo corner treatment on the main nav is nice, maybe it could be "played-up" a little more. It could make the buttons easier to look at.
- liquid0
photo corner treatment? not sure what you mean..... any suggestions on how I could play it up a bit more
- piperboytoy0
I like the layout but not on a gray background. Think about who you are targeting! That is a wedding site. It seems rather cold!.
Other than that I like the clean layout and images.
- liquid0
gray background is just for now to match the original site.....I did the original site but about 7 months ago.....
http://www.kleinfeldbridal.com
everything will be getting changed but need to have some sort of relationship with all of them first..... before I redo everything...... there is going to be a jewelry site as well thats next week......
any suggestions for future versions about coloring
- piperboytoy0
Stick with soft pastel colors. You should use flowers as your color reference. Either go to your local florist or buy some magazines.
You should also check out some bridal magazines for inspirations.
The blue and gray you used in your old site is really masculine. I'm sure 95% of the users will be female. So you got to design with them in mind.
Hope this make sense. Your new layout is great. The red/pink color is much softer, but you should even soften the red a bit more.
- agentfour0
nice.
but personally i dont like photos fading out on edges or fading into colours unles the actual photo goes into that colour and it looks real. I really like that movement tho.
and i think it would be nicer if you didn have those little gorner thingys on the nav buttons. Keep it clean
- agentfour0
err......corner things
- Mountain0
Kill the music! I was just looking around for some bridal stuff while listening to Wind Beneath My Wings on iTunes and it totally interefered with the track. I had to click off to get back to my music.
Other than that, looks pretty good. Better than the old version. I agree about the, err, corner things on the nav buttons. They look a little too mechanical or harsh. Kind of techno-ish which doesn't really go with roses and carnations.
And I know, the clients probably want the music...
- liquid0
thanks for all the great comments......I will post my revisions...... a lot of what you said I agree with........ I am going to try and get them to see it my way..... but if they like it there they may not want me to move it...... it's weird working with people..... when you do your own stuff its so much easier......
And yes....they want music.....
about the flash..... about the colors blending in...... any suggestions...... these are the photos they gave me to work with......