crit me please!
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- lwrs
hi all
please check out my new site and let me know what you think. It's gone through a few html versions, this is the first time i've done a 100% flash site.
thanks
m
- kibuchi0
Nice stuff on there, good pieces of work.
my only minor thing is that I had to click on a link to get the main panel up. I spent a few seconds clicking logofolio etc and nothing appeared to be happening. Maybe bring the panel in automatically.
Good mouseover sounds too!
- _roh0
hey nice! i dig the 'lowres' type, tight menu too. however when the sections load in theres overlaps and liitle misaligns in some places and the initial news section looks nowhere near as tight as the other sections.
still, very tight tho, diggin it.
- wendell0
good heaven i am very pleased when i saw it it is a fine one and it has humor. logo part is so good i again was pleased then
and it is fun you to have your logo like a male 'cock'? coming up
well done on that one
- lwrs0
thanks for looking guys.
kibuchi: Thats something thats been at the back of my mind since i started the site. Maybe the panel should come in automatically.
_roh: You're right, there are lots of alignments and overlaps that need to be tweeked.
wendell: thanks for making me laugh. I didn't intend the logo to have a 'male cock' in it!!
cheers!
m
- ozhanlion0
first impression it didn't give me that tech feeling which you create with your sound fxs. maybe the color, maybe the hearts, I dunno it is an impression.
also your next buttons are contrary to that feeling, because they are vector artworks.
also the diagonal lines maybe much more nearer so the user understands that they are whited out. usability.
other than this, of course nice working of flash, it seems you have given some effort on this one, nice works really.
take mines as suggestions, not trying to be a hardass.
oz.
- goygoygoy0
i like it, very good & nice logos lwrs !
- grafiske0
The color scheme is real good. The site itself has a very original look and feel.
The posters are superb.
Possible mistake: The news stayed on the page (behind other elements) when I was browsing it.
- lwrs0
Cheers for the commments again guys!
ozhanlion: Perhaps your right about the sounds suiting a 'tech' style site more than this one. I wanted to make the sounds kind of cute but unusual at the same time. I also agree I have some useability issues with the next button. Thanks for the input.
goygoygoy:thanks!
grafiske:I wasn't sure whether to hide the news box or not when the other sections loaded. They seemed to cover it pretty well and produced a layered effect so i went with it. Thanks for your thoughts.
Cheers
m
- crap0
I love it!
- tomkat0
veery nice..
type is hard to read , though...
- brandelec0
sweet, i like it
type is hard on the wee eyes thoughlove the concept