Logo Crit
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- TResudek
A quick logo I created for a Customer Relationship Management/Demographics application. Just wondering what you all have to say about it. Not too attached to it so feel free to bash. :)
Thanks,
TR
- fits0
i think the bars work really well like a chart.
- grafiske0
The green on most letters looks bizarre, a different color might fit better.
If you adapted some sort of grid in a letter or surrounding area or what have you.. I think it would up the graph effect, which I agree works very well.
- ER0
yeah, the bars are clever, keep them but drop the green. probably just to black. might want to consider the bars to have bit of a gradient to look illuminated. also if they are in a color sequence (like different shades of a color) it not only does the bar chart thing but might show a growth metaphor also.
- knoxel0
nice concept... i think you should do something with the h so it connects or flows better with the bars tho... something like this..
and maybe even space the last 4 letters out a little bit. the two t's look nice touching but the e's that touch the t maybe need a little more space.
- knoxel0
oh... and just say no to gradients.
:)
- ER0
most people just dont know how to do gradients.
- TResudek0
Really color is no issue because this logo will, in all likelyhood, never be printed. It will only exist on screen.
Thanks for all of the input. Keep it coming.
TR
- knoxel0
your right... but i think logos should be minimal in color, so its more feasible to print.
you can always add subtle visual treatments for web use.
- swollenelbow0
i like what knoxel did. he's so dreamy with all his logos n junk.
=)
- radar0
I agree with the darker outlying type - it grounds the logo more - and the break in the "h" could be tightened a bit to match the kerning in the rest of the word. But overall very nice.
- swollenelbow0
print is more important than web. you can put shit in a psd and it will be web ready.
- knoxel0
:)
- TResudek0
Anything to say about these colors?
Thanks,
TR
- sevenfingers0
funny, it definitely reads worse in monochrome... I had a hard time making out the word even though I knew what it was.
The last one looks great... feels awfully similiar to something else though.
- ILuvSushi0
why not try a green color pallette?
CRM is managing your customers and customers typically or should make a company money.
- Blueman0
I like the last one too..
- ********0
But again that 'h' is bit weird. The cap inside it is too big, it messes up the kerning of the whole logo - but i agree that the last one is far the best :)
- brundlefly0
I wouldnt change a thing :)
- TResudek0
Hmmm... I guess I don't really see the problem with the h. My approach was to take the standard "h" and break it in two by deleting a small section between the stem and then body of the letter. This section is the same width as the space between the "i" and "l". I see what you mean about the letter not flowing as well as it could but i am not sure exactly what to do about it. Problem is that i don't want the text to overpower the "graph" visual.
Ideas?
TR
- monkeyboy0
i like it, its catchy, the colors and shape stick in my head.
good job on the concept.