Logo Crit
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- fake_it_up
Hey re working my logo let me know what you think good bad ugly all is welcome thanks...
- unknown0
you're not going to like this but I dont like your logo.
a) shields were a fad and yours is done badly at that, it looks like clip art from the 70's.
b)the logo there is quite big and already it is failing in legibility.
c) not memorable
d) does not look related to design
e) the type underneath does not relate and is ill-considered.
but dont let me ruin your day, I'm just giving my opinion - keep trying :)
- save0
Sorry....but its shit!!!
cant be be arsed writing why.
if your a designer you should already know..
- longman0
i'd start again
- fake_it_up0
thanks for the feed back yeah im going to play around with it a little more i like the idea i tihnk its gotta be refined a little...
- Mimio0
Start with the goal of communicating something significant. Not just pledging allegiance to the uncreative.
- Bluejam0
"Not just pledging allegiance to the uncreative."
That's a great line.
- steak&liquor0
Hey look!! Its that guy from queer eye! "Pledge Allegiance" - Why thats so fab!
- dequinix0
Love hurts.
I like simple logos. The shield is okay, but as said, it's already a bit illegible. If you plan on keeping it, try changing the font inside.
Your name is interesting, and I think you could take a more interesting spin on it somehow, better than a coat of arms type deal.
- fake_it_up0
Yeah it hurts... but u grow from it or so im told... yeah i wana keep the Gen. idea but refine it a little bit and yes the "fake-up" is hard to read..... thanks all
- ********0
it's ok you could use better fonts, but I like the WINGS! ;)