Feedback on logos needed
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- AssassinAve
Need some feedback on these logos. I posted a while ago with only two examples. Have done a few more comps.
Just a student project, not real!
The idea is for a new language school. Though there are many what fun are they to go to I ask?
here are the image links
First set
Second set
- unknown0
fix the linx
- AssassinAve0
Links never work for me. A web guru I am not.
try this
- ER0
1st page, second row down, on right.
though it doesnt look like a school. looks more like a company.
2nd page. the one in the squares (black and white) looks most like a school.
- save0
the two faces facing eachother...
- Jnr_Madison0
1st one on the second row of the first set.
- AssassinAve0
get on top!!
- ********0
dude, no offense, but put some numbers on them, especially if you are asking people's opinions of them. :)
- i2kdesign0
first page send row and third with the lips! good some how incorporate the lips more...
cheers,
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- unknown0
I looked at the multitudes of designs and gave up on commenting - you should always kill some ideas in the early stages & keep killing ideas as you go along. Like start of w/ 50 good ideas but dont show the client more than 3
- unknown0
again, first page second row are nice logos but it doesn't say school to me, it says mobile comms / wireless networking because those symbols are typically used as such.
Its all about the signifier and the signified, see; magritte.
- unknown0
I would look to develop the third row of the first page bearing in mind what works about the row above.
- AssassinAve0
Hey I appreciate all the time you take to look at these. I am having trouble getting feedback at school and I only post them here because hopefully if you post here you actually care and consider design an essential of life.
Jax, you are right about numbering them. Should have done it since i have to look back often.
Some of them like the wireless ones do look as said. But I must exhaust the ideas before deciding. Some are complete garbage and im sorry if im wasting your time looking at them.
It is not intentional.
Cheers!
- unknown0
"trouble getting feedback"? Doesnt teachers always love to critize? If you dont get any feedback, its probably because they have trouble finding bad things to say ;)