pick one
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- widz
one, two or three?
- save0
woh! none of the above!
- pascii0
3
- widz0
constructive comments are welcome, no abuse please.
- unknown0
the naive handwriting may be perceived as a little patronising toward disabled people, although admiteddly even thinking like this is actually patronising but you have to look at mass perception.
It looks like one of those BBC schools programme logos where they try to teach kids about drugs or sex in a cool way but end up just looking shit. no offence.
- save0
here's my constructive comment....
start again cos there awful.
sorry!
...and listen to rasko!
- waynepixel0
ya what rasko said.
Oslo the logo does not read very well at the moment. Could do with some more attention on the layout of the type.
- innit0
3 but needs work
- ribit0
I don't want to pick one... keep sketching.
The wheelchair logo thing is too scraggly (is that a word?)... could it be more structured?
'mobility' and 'depot' don't seem to get on well with each other... one too out of control, one very structured.
You still need to find a good arrangement of the 3 elements.
- Jnr_Madison0
Yeah, I think the idea needs more work.
- vespa0
sorry mate needs work.
I thought the hand was a puddle of stuff that the wheelchair was stuck in at first.
I'm guessing that the concept is for the handwritten effect to give a human touch to it but you need to tighten it up a lot or it just looks unprofessional. What if just the hand was handdrawn but the rest was tighter?
- monty0
Wow, I first thought the wheelchair was on fire!
I think it needs work, the concept is there. But the hand kind of implies that they are giving away wheelchairs.. Which I dont think they are. But if they do, tell them to cantact me, I'll do their logo for free.
- smartK0
go for nice lines instead of the haintpainted style
like I did on http://www.markus-tschann.com/ click work then the little orange thinggie
sorry for the plug
- vespa0
nice work smartK
- rasp0
1 reads as MEiLiTY depot if the others weren't there to 'help'
seriously
sketch a few ideas down. this was your first and only idea I take it?
If you want the hand/wheelchair/carer type thing then go for it.. how about icon based? like the bathroom door signs style.
but in my opinion... with someone in the family that is on 'mobility' the last thing want reminding of is the caring, helping hand of others...
mobility is supposed to help them by giving them independence
- widz0
This is my last post, you guys know fuck all about design.
- unknown0
(T_T)
waaaaaughh!!
- monty0
haha
we apologize... for laughin so hard. You seriously suck, get back to making fries loser.
- widz0
am actualy laughing, but my tone dosnt come accross in type
- monty0
was this a hoax?
- unknown0
:)