flyer, crit needed
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- pascii
http://www.boogie-project.ch/cri…
what u think? it's for a mainstream house/trance club.
(4 pages in cmyk)i kinda like it how it is, maybe you have some suggestions!
- unknown0
looks good to me.
- stewart0
ok, except the right aligned text...
- ********0
sorry it's just me but i don't like that overweight big-tits chick
but design is nice
- save0
.....I haven't seen cut off corners for ages.
- vespa0
nice. right aligned text does scare me though. I don't really know why.
- unknown0
I agree with Stewart, ranged right for that amount of copy is a bit confusing on the eye.
- pascii0
thank u! i'll do some changes!
- Bullitt0
DISCO!
- pascii0
a bottle vodka later, it's rearranged. i'm not quite sure yet, what u think? it was the clients wish...
- stylepimp0
I think it suits the theme, but I don't like the 'major-dance'-logo. its style is completly different to the rest...
- pascii0
i agree with the logo. but the client loves it - it was on my 1st draft (which was in a diffrents style) bad luck.
tnx
- blend20
You got three different color schemes going. I like the last page and would suggest you use one coherent look throughout. (You could also add a transition from one page to another?)
On the big page the rectangle would look better if it wasn't "almost" centered. Try using "double golden"-rule for alignment.
You are kinda trying to get best of all worlds by using too many styles at yhe same time.
- pascii0
thank u blend, i'll play wih the transition, colors and the alignment.
i agree, there are too many styles in one flyer. it's, we all know it, a mixture from 2 drafts - client wishes.