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- schedule2
Hi Everyone!
We are in the process of updating Invicid, giving the website a new look. I would like to get any opinions out there if you feel so inclined.
http://www.invicid.comAs always thank you Newstoday.
Mark
- steadyvibe0
why does everyone hosted my media temple always put it on there site?
- abizzyman0
It's nice...
very well executed - and timely in design --- but I gotta say I'm getting a bit tired of all the vector-drawn models and 45 degree lines.
Put the execution, layout and navigation are very friendly and pretty... so... well done overall.
- schedule20
because they sponsor our web hosting.
- agentfour0
i think your old site looked more professional.
i dont like the blue-grey gradient
i liked the simplicity and minimalism on your old site i think
- neoneo0
You are right about the gradient I don't like it either
otherwise nice
- unformatted0
i think you could make the text more crisp. it doesnt' look very crisp to me.
- jevad0
looks nice - not too fond of the body copy or typography though...
- plamenski0
You have spelling mistakes.
>> We are not coporate <<
- plamenski0
I thought T-shirts were unisex wear.
- missie0
no way, boys shirts are too big for girls.
- unknown0
the design seems to somehow have got worse. the blue grey is horrible. The type is awful, line lengths, leading everything iabout the type is amateur and has no attention to detail. There are typos everywhere. The copy is bad beyone belief, its utterly pretentious, one minute you're bitching about corporations (fine by me) and the next your 'anti-politically correct', seem to me you're just kids who read no-logo and wanted to be controversial as some kind of lame marketing ploy.
I'm being harsh but I think I should because you're setting up as a shop, but its the truth anyway. I think you can do better.
- clint0
i like it, but i personaly don't think it looks very original, i've seen that kind of style done a bit too many time. the main links are too small... but don't get me wrong, still like it.
- mvb20
Whats with with t-shirts that look like they were misprinted? Maybe its just a personal taste thing but why would you print a t-shirt design up and over the the collar and shoulder of a shirt? Or on the side so your are covers most of it?
It just looks like it was put on the press wrong and misprinted. More power to you if people buy them, but I don't get it.
- lookinglass0
lose the blue gradient.
- schedule20
thanks everyone for the comments. I will be making changes and tweaks throughout the week before we set up the shopping cart.
Sorry for all the text errors, we knew there was going to be alot of them. It's time for us to get a good editor.
Thanks again.
- joyride0
Clean up the fonts. There are so many nice free pixel fonts out, get them, use them. Nav needs some work, or just better placement, bigger type. Its does not have a nice flow. it reades rt to lft and its on the bottom middle. Just a bit outta place me thinks. But its not bad. Don't trash it and start over, just refine it a bit.
Good luck.
- ********0
it's pretty good, I might use better fonts though, maybe try some miniml.com fonts since you have all of this in Flash, maybe not though?
- atomica0
Hah, man i see the thread, but the sites down and unviewable when i finally click. Great. Why sell misprinted shirts though? C'mon have some creativity... those shirts are awesome, and as for people saying he's just a kid setting up a shop, not true. I've been a follower of invicid for a while, own a few shirts, because their high quality, and amazingly unique and aesthetically pleasing, IMHO. I wanna look at this beta site!! lol. Well good luck inv. I always thought the work spoke for itself on your site, and the site was merely the tool...
- schedule20
thanks JazX. I think I will try some of Craig's fonts here. I was trying to get away from using pixel fonts but the other ones just dont appear clear enough.
- plamenski0
It's not a good sign though that you took it down quickly after all these comments.
Stand up for your design!!!