poster crit?
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- KingMob
Hey everyone, I just did a poster for my band's first gig. Let me know what y'all think. I'm trying to think of what I could add/take away before adding it to my portfolio and stuff....
- plamenski0
very good. love it.
- Bio0
goosd stuff.
might dig it without those top rays, but that is just personal preference. dig those marks in the bird.
- p1xelfrog0
Mucho X-cellante!
great poster. Agree with Bio, love the Bird and ink spots.
:P
- db0
love it but i would make the "Free 4 song..." part a different font, just so that on eyour using doesn't get too monotenous.
- Buckyball20
everything but the 4 arrows up top. seems a bit tacked on.
other than that, nice.
bB
- TResudek0
I agree... everything looks great. One suggestion is to drop the 123.456.7890 format on the phone number... aren't the periods dead? Try just using spaces slashes or something.
My 2 scents,
TRPS - your audio page doesn't work.
- dequinix0
Love the general look/feel, but on closer look, it looks like the arrows on the top and the arrows on the bottom kind of clash. Moreover, agree w/ the font thing previously mentioned.
Nice work!
- preston0
doesnt really say concert to me
like if i dont know that strategy game is some band, im not sure what I'm looking at.
visually exxcellent though
- bomy_dick0
nice griffin ! .. i agree with last comment.. a poster is first meant to announce something. it's not clear it's a concert..
nice layout
- Rementera0
Trajan is the most overused font in the world. maybe use something else. american typewriter might look cool.
- brooke0
1. Good color.
2. Cool layout & overall design.
3. Good typeface for title.
4. Bad typeface for sub-info.
- scratch0
I love it...it's visually striking.
just one thing (and this is being picky) but the Word Strategy isn't centered properly. if you move it over to the left, it'll line up with the beginning of "the" and the end of game.
cheers.
- Rementera0
also, i think orange is a little expected. maybe use another fun color.
- unknown0
i dunno. the bottom seems to be really dirty but everything else is perfect and clean.
- KingMob0
Thanks for your comments everyone. Very helpful.
- jevad0
love it immensley!
but don't get the 4 arrows? like bucky said - they look kinda tacked on and don't really add anything..IMHO would look better w/out them...
but regardless - it's got a nice look and fell to it
- KingMob0
Yeah, I kept the arrow thing in there just because that's the band's logo. For my portfolio I'll probably just take it out...
- jevad0
ah! well then it makes sense to have it there!