business card feedback
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- ********
hello folks tell me what you think of these two concepts for my business cards....any fans of photos in bc here
- Nirvous0
I like the white one.
Do you only produce club flyers? I get that impression from the photo.
- ********0
1 so people can read it
- Bluejam0
You got a typo on 'multimedia' in both designs.
I'd say number two and drop the photo's...trying to place Dekode Design as a book jacket next to Carson's Second Sight is not a good idea (IMO).
- piperboytoy0
i would make the font size smaller as well. Especially your name and contact info. and put the "web print, multimedia" line on the front of the card. There is a lot happening in the back of the card, just makes it simplier.
yes get rid of the photo.
- ********0
i c, yea i might go with another pic as for the typos duly noted, i could not spell kat to save my life
- gravityroom0
Photo is terrible. The rest looks pretty good though...
I dont' get the book idea... unless you designed those books...
- ********0
- mrdobolina0
nice changes, I like 3 alot.
- Mimio0
3. Looks nice and balanced.
- piperboytoy0
I like the changes too. To make your layout cleaner, you should make the address and name, full justify, so that there is no ragging on the right side.
Also try to do the same with the front of the card too, you don't need to indent the web.print.multimedia tagline.
Just one question, why is there a gap at the top of the card on the back? I know it's a design detail, but it doesn't seem to line up with any elements. Maybe it should sit right on top of the contact info? Same thing with the bar on the front. Just a suggestion.
Other then that, it's a great design. I think you should mix them up and get the 3 colors printed. :-)
- _b_0
never saw the first lot,
but the current ones are all really nice. you could seriously go with any of them.
- ********0
very nice!
I like #3 the best. But maybe move "web.print.multimedia" a little to the left so that the "a" in "multimedia" lines up with the "m" in dekodedesign.com". Also, web.print.multimedia is a little hard to read with it being grey. ok thats all. great job.