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- abizzyman
http://www.crystalbluemagazine.c…
it's a beta (check the original - hehe)... the 'distribution' link goes nowhere yet - waiting info from customer...
... this is a pretty low-content site with links to terrible sites... but - any thoughts?
- unknown0
i don't like it, but i think it fits (just judging by the cover) the magazine very well. and everything is very big (low content, i understand, hehe).
- Duane0
it's not my style either, but i think it looks good considering the look of the magazine. i'm not sure about the yellow color choice. since the magazine is named after the colors of the caribbean i'd keep it in shades of blue and pull the focus off the diver. it might emphasize the connection to the water.
- 4cY0
yeah, where does the yellow come from?
try it without the yellow, and give the diver a diff. color (less contrasting..).
- abizzyman0
oh... the original logo (masthead) is blue and yellowy lime-like.
just doing as requested... perhaps I should give them another option (even though they're sold on this).
- Jnr_Madison0
I'd bump the quality up on the header jpg slightly, looks too dirty.
Also agree with the other guys comments.
- lind0
I would get rid of the white borders and try a white or deep blue background.
Also, since the website doesn't have much text content, I would have built the entire site in flash with a snazzy navigation. Same amount of time as an HTML version, I think.
- abizzyman0
$$ lind....
... i thought about doing flash...
... all comes down to my time and money - I designed and produced this thing in 7 hours start to finish... and I'm not even getting that times worth in money.
thanks for the feedback everyone... I'm going to make adjustments just so I feel good about myself. Ya'll gave good feedback.