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- jevad
http://www.newbrandvision.com/pr…
updated from yesterday - handing to client tomorrow so anything you can see that really needs a look at please say
ta!
- unknown0
nice jevad.
should the email in the contact section be clickable maybe?
- jevad0
uh...yes...it should - bugger! argh I hate missing piddly things like that...oh well!
oh yeah - the contact form don't work yet neither - but it will..
cheers junky!
- atomica0
sexy. I think the client will enjoy it, and it should easily grab and impress most clients. Nice. I actually read it through, crazy me... but it kept me interested for some reason....
- jevad0
must've done something right then! cheers randy!
- piperboytoy0
nice design, is that Tom Arnold?
the next page link is kind of hard to see.
- sexypixel0
looks sexy. i would re arange the 'get flash thing. It should be smaller and after the enter site link.
i hope you are charging them for your photos.
- jevad0
tom arnold! hahahah
yeah - next page link could darken...and tony's right about the get flash link needing rearragement.
coolio - thanks all - I'm going to finish this up and hit the sack hard!
- celluz0
neat site man...
the intro reminds much of slotmachines. and when the logo dissapears, it suddenly comes back at the bottom fading in from the right - kinda confusing.
maybe you should reuse the downmovement of the logo somewhere again... (picslides e.g.)
- celluz0
i mean from the left, but well ....
- Louno0
chibi man
- 67nj0
very nice but dont u think that with nextpage buttons should come the back buttons as well?
PS: did you get the homepage image from your honeymoon microsite?
- corin0
Just Lovely, i would suggest making the contact details selectable so that they can be copy and pasted but apart from that just lovely.