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- MrBixler0
Christ, cut to the chase, this thing takes up the whole internet. I'm getting bored.
- octavius0
send us 1000 bucks today and we'll teach you how to write a really long winded story in a very mediocre fashion
- srvollmer0
"very mediocre" ha!
everyone is a critic....
- kpl0
it's long.
and oh so turgid.
- octavius0
nice 1....instant karma. (shoulda signed up for that writing class)
- kpl0
I'm making penis references because THIS GUY IS A DICK.
- virtu0
that guy needs to get kicked in the nuts. he shoulda spent that money right away, or atleast part of it. that story fuckin kills me, doesnt he know the old saying, "greed makes the world go round"
neway.
____mje
- ronnypudding0
that guy's kind of a dork.
- Teck0
That story was way too long and it had a crappy ending. By the end I really did not care anymore!
- raulito0
i loved it too.
How can I read the end chapter? (number 10) there is a paypal link and some email he received, but where is the ending? He wants us to pay to read it?
- raulito0
oh the joke about the heart transplant and the banker was worth the time alone.
- raulito0
never mind i found it. im liking this guy kess and less towards the end. at the beginning i wanted him to win!
- unknown0
I read that about two years ago.
and of course I sat here at work and read it all again before lunch.
I'm grounding myself for a week for wasting my time like that.
- unknown0
man he could have ended it with more style
what a bloke
- MrBixler0
bored!
- unknown0
Most of you sound as sad as the people that were mailnig him... lighten up...
half of you are saying it was too long... but you were obviously hooked!