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- sara37
which one do you like most?
- pr20
the one on the left is good.
- afriend0
Numer 3, but the typography could use some love. Perhaps try and make it a bit thinner, more elegant. the colors work very nicely though.
- unknown0
1
- unknown0
2
- stimuli0
The top logo mark is the strongest but I think the type lets it down. Why not try a few different serif fces out?
- pr20
i'll go with the crowd the one on the left with no1.
- dstlb0
I like the logo marque of no.1 but I think the way the blue curve comes round needs a bit more work.
Try some more typefaces, not keen on any of the ones you've used at the moment. The serif ones look better but there are much nicer ones of that style you could use.
- unknown0
2 but the type is way out of date typeface and totally uncomplimentary to the symbol.
- kerus0
ill have to go with 1 also..
it kinda works well
whereas the same logo doesn't work as well here:
http://www.onedaysavior.com/
heh
- unknown0
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- unknown0
haha wroooong thread
- keyl0
1
but different font for the bottom blabla. lighter, less crappy..
the left part of it needs some tweaking
- zaven0
number 3 but with a different blue maybe...
- Ojes0
the thirst is better
- unknown0
number on elooks trustworth... the others look too loose
- stimuli0
The curve of the 'e' from the cross doesn't look right at the moment. Maybe if you follow the tail of the 'e' round so the logo makes almost a perfect circle?
Rough example of what I mean (where the tail follows the curve on the right hand side):
- sara370
thank you very much, people.
i enjoyed your critics..