crit my Illustration 2
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- modularsin
ok, I made a few changes to the original. I dumped the pattern overlay I included on it in photoshop and dropped a background in.
I would love to hear comments on the new version.
Thanks again friends!
- fatoe0
did you draw that or trace it in illustrator?
- ********0
she's sexy. I would drop that left booby shadow on the white... give her just a lil more and that would also make it even with the right booby.
- modularsin0
i did the sketch first, then imported it in ill and traced with the pen tool.
- unknown0
i don't like how the cap has the same image as the background, but that's just me.
- Tyrone0
bigger tits
- unknown0
she looks like she going to fall backwards... needs some clockwise rotation.
- Redmond0
Nice, you took out all it's personality and left the wooden non-head comfort-shaped baseball cap.
- brooke0
10 billion times better.
I <3 pink.
- BonSeff0
great illi. my only beef is the girls leg on the left. it just doesnt look right the way it goes up in the dress. it leans too far to the left. outta perspective.
maybe its just me. tooo many drawring classes i guess. i had anal teachers
- ********0
move her from the first location....cus the tre in the back makes her look french...(armpits)
- piperboytoy0
great illy, but I think her proportions are a bit off. Her arms look too long and the hat is too big on her head.
I like the bg image is the same as the hat, it ties in the illustration well.
Great works.
- modularsin0
thanks. I'll we tweaking this guy out for awhile. And Ill consider some of those french comments.
:)
- redFridge0
nice color
i would fix her right shin explosion thingy
arms are a bit long as stated
good job :)
- jpolk0
lose the heavy outline