crit my illustration
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- modularsin
Hi Everyone.
I've been starring at my laptop to long and I think my eyes are wigging out on me. Can I get some opinions on this piece, like it or not like it?
It's just a fun piece and style I am experimenting in.Thanks as always!
- ********0
the pattern flatens the image alot. you could contrast this mith more highlight/shadow and also a little attention to colors used (perhaps not so muted in foreground, etc...). overall pretty good. I would advise to keep trying different things with it, so much vedtor art out there, good to be different.
nice
- stewart0
sorry, don't like it.
is it about girls with pimples?
- unknown0
i think it would be better if you used a different pattern for shirt / skin / cap / etc.
- Bio0
like the hat.
i dont care for the pattern in the chick. it obscures the detail in her face and hands.
background has nice colors that blend well with the chick and the hat. the blur around her doesnt do anything for me.
you can thank me for my insightful critique by sending me one of those phat ass hats. =)
- ********0
hey not bad at all...
the only thing i would do is:
remove the hat, and take away the armoire... maybe throw a shirt on her, (she looks cold),
make the size of the graphic a bit smaller, change the background color to #666666.. and maybe try the pink sunsets as green triangles... then again I would maybe make her hair longer too.... excellent job!
- modularsin0
thank you for the insightful comments, I'm going to give my eyes a bit of a rest and then I'll work on some of your guys suggestions. I would love to hear any others...
- ********0
mod - i's just kidding, looks good, keep pushing yourself
- Redmond0
I like it! My crit would be that the tip of the hat isn't curvy, it's too rigid. Wich breaks the flow a little. Love the colors and the effect.
- modularsin0
*bmp*
- Redmond0
Did you just call me a bitmap?
- brooke0
I'd say... either put the pattern in her, or in the dress. But not both.
But, hey, what the hell do I know?
- modularsin0
thnkx everyone!
I'm going to work on some changes today and ad more to it perhaps.
cheers!
- sauerbraten0
i'd like to see some texture/value/tone in her skin, most people out there nowadays can come up with a vector/photo trace (not saying that's what you've done here) but adding shadows etc. to the form would create interest and realism.
i don't like the PS transparency texture, it distracts from the "art" of the piece, if it's supposed to be more abstract then ok, but it seems like you'd want to spotlight the figures more than extraneous textures etc.
my 2 bucks.
nice work!