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- abizzyman
building this site...
... launched it... not entirely complete (the last two main links are still blank)
... posted this before... made changes ... blah blah.
your thoughts please.
- abizzyman0
WTF?
hehe.
- k0na_an0k0
yo man... really like the style and feel. works great.
maybe have a sound on/off button. i really liked the sounds though.. added to the mystery and feel of the site.
also the commas in words like I'm and We'll are screwed up in your text on the left. simple fix.
like the work although it takes a few clicks to get to.
smooth animations. me likey.
- majman0
really like it.
the image on the splash page looks a little unclear though. perhaps the outer glow effect isn't necessary.looks like your apostrophes aren't working in the text file either, at least on my machine...
over all, i think it's some great work!
- k0na_an0k0
hahaha... i said commas and they're apostrophes. i'm such a stoopid non knowing what a little tihngy is fuck.
- abizzyman0
nice! thanks fellas!...
... it's weird... cuz the text in the blog is coming from an external text file...
... and I'm looking at on my mac... and I get the boxes... but I hop over to another mac... no boxes... then I hop to a pc... no boxes.
weird... the text box is set to use the flash _sans font.
... any ideas?
- Jnr_Madison0
y'know the _sans and _serif aren't actually flash fonts. All the do is use the closest matching on the users machine. Therefore you can get some pretty wacky results if they set some weird shit as their default fonts. I always use arial.
- abizzyman0
i'm educated... NT works.
cool, Jnr.
- intoxicated0
I would suggest embedding the font for the clock & time. Otherwise very elegant.
- ********0
very nice.
yeah, the date&clock should be more integrated with the overall looks..
and maybe you could try Unicode for the apostrophes??
- 8dot30
the design looks nice, but the navigation is hard to understand.
i thought the links on the bottom of the site were the main nav.
one more thing. on your splash page i didnt know where to click, if i didnt mistakenly moved my mouse over the middle of the page i would never have found. seems like you need a NETER SITE button, your being obvious with the requirement links so it seems like i should be clicking those rather than dig for the enter site link.