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nice and clean, only thing I'd say is to perhaps work on that paragraph of copy, maybe the line length is too long or something it just doesn't make me want to read.. maybe look at pulling out the first line a bit stronger or bigger and just liven up the typo a bit.
and same with the other pages.. the line length look a bit long and the type is a bit dull looking.
the nav didn't jump out at me right away and yes it is a bit dull but so is the product
overall it is laid out nicely and looks good
Like matt25 said, the nav doesn't exactly jump out at me. But overall nicely done.
thanks everyone for the feeback so far.
The product isn't really all that complicated so I though keeping it simple would be the best way to present it.
Its very basic, but a great product.
I'm hoping to eventually experiment with the block and build a concrete skatepark someday.
Thanks again for the comments and keep them coming, if there's really anything more to say.