v3 site crit
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- SLAZ
hey people..working on my redesign, here are the comps to this point. whatcha think?
it needs to be clean and simple... i get a lot of clients looking through it...
home page:
http://www.slazdesign.com/v3/v3.…landing page:
http://www.slazdesign.com/v3/v3i…
- SLAZ0
no crit love?
- lefton0
what's not to like? it's simple, clean. looks good. lots of orange. possible orange overload. it works. seen many sites like it, but it works.
- corin0
really like the type in the logotype and the cuttedoffedness, also love the armidillo logo. My only problem is the blurriness around the main image. Rather than the glow i would just use flat colours. I think it would make the vector work look a lot stringer.
- corin0
stringer = stronger
- BonSeff0
like the lips one, but without the lips
is way clean
- Mick0
If you're going for the clean look I'd also try something other than that muddy gray background - even white.
- SLAZ0
thanks peoples...
i agree on the bluriness on the cover area...
does tha navigation work for you? easy 3 links on the top and then the inside gets #'s along the bottom per category...
- exador0
totally love it...
great work man..
- smartK0
looks good, navigation will sure work.
the arrows at the right bottom ... will they show prev/next pic of the selected project or bring you to the next project? (or both?)looking forward to see the finished version
- SLAZ0
thanks exador and smartK...
the arrows will bring you to the next project or any secondary images that may apply for the selected project
thanks for the positive feedback...
- bhawk0
7.0
- SLAZ0
7.0?
- Blofeldt0
Yes, nice. I think on the internal page, you could do with more differentation between the sections. Also, I think the text should be on the left of the graphic.
I like the ardvarrk, but i'm sure i've seen it before. Like the pattern, very with the times.
I saw that someone liked the way you've done your logo. I hate the backwards N. Makes me think of techno album covers for some reason.
The angle reminds me of Egg.comOverall, cool. Sure it will impress when completed.