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- robotpanic
I doing a CD Cover and it's just not there yet, it has to be clean, fun, mixed up, summer and the eye has to stay.... Any idea's how I can make it better???
- unknown0
.........and the eye has to stay................craps,huh?
well then; enlarge the chicks and get rid of hand up right.
- niku0
either seems to empty on the top left, or to much going on on the top right.
i saw boobies.
- petzi0
not sure about the blue...
- dequinix0
Shit. My only real recommendation was gonna be GET RID OF THE EYE. =/
- Stanton0
I'd lose the eye too :/
- unknown0
the eye looks like a dodgy vagina... get rid of it, thats the only way you'll improve it!
- robotpanic0
I'm with you on the eye 100% I'm going to ask the client if I can can it, problem is, its part of there campaign...
- smartK0
if you can't remove it you should at least rotate it 90°
- niku0
it needs lens flare
- chilaquil0
i like the eye. and i like the fact that it looks like a vagina. i think that's clever.
although i have absolutely no idea who the band is and what they're like, but an eyball as a pussy gets props from me. I also like the chicks with the ghettoblaster tits.
you can lose everything else.
- pagedown0
yeah, keep the chicks, rotate the eye 90 degrees and reduce it by 75% in the lower left corner.. it'll be there but you won't notice it. then tell the client "that's the way it stays". they'll understnd.
- yott0
the eye's ok. just drop the feather... it is so 1997. if you could cut it roughly as if it was cut from a magazine it would improve it greatly. does it have tobe be green though? i'd do it in b&w, maybe even bmp it.
- robotpanic0
Absolutely right got to get rid of the feather......
- unknown0
.......so ´97.........i thought I was in a timewarp and it was 1997............
if it´s not, loose everything but the girls, vectorize ´em, make the eye an outline, pee on everything and rescan the whole schmeer........now that´s compempery design for ya´
- unknown0
..............god damn it, stewart; that´s three times now. We gotta get in buisness together. You are like my oppinions come to live.
......but hey, you didn´t loose the hand up right.........you´re fired, man........
- petzi0
hmmm. now it's too much tits for me... i agtree with the eye post.
- stewart0
Jagdpanter, before we're getting in buisness together i want to know how YOUR work looks like.
- robotpanic0
I think I'll start over... Client didn't like the girls anyways... I dont want to be so 97 but the client seems to be that way inclined...
Is this any better??? I used a couple of things that aren't mine as placeholders for now..
http://www.synentertainment.com/…
