site crit.
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- abizzyman
attorney...
lots of copy...
some gross pics...
terrible imagery...... and next to no cash for payment (doing this as a favor to the friend of the attorney)
- BonSeff0
are you kidding me bizzy!
most firms would be so lucky.
nice work
- jox0
niiice, I have nothing to complain about, except the horizontal scrolling on the "potential clients" page...
Great job man!
- Mick0
My only comment is on the homepage. The double-scrollbar on that page is a little annoying. You could perhaps align the welcome text/pic left so the text wraps around it and removes the need for that scrollbar.
Also watch the kerning on the work "INJURY - it looks a little like "in jury"
- abizzyman0
really Mick? The homepage is giving you a double scrollbar?
... damn, I thought I tested this down to 800 x 600 on mac/pc ie and nutscrape....... hmmm..
... oh - yeah, I know about the double scroll on the form - it was an existing form that I said I'd change the font on only. I just don't feel like messing with the file - and if they don't care - then I don't.
- smoke0
kool
- k0na_an0k0
looks good.
on a pc in ie no double scrolling.
- fogle0
PC, IE6, 1024x768
i didnt have any double scrolling.
i thought the site was very nice for a "favor". you should be proud!
- AD0
a lawyer without money????
ya okay - not a very good lawyer then
get paid man
- piperboytoy0
yeah nice design abizzy. how come ur using so many framesets? nice flash too.
- visible0
yeah im not diggin the double scroll. layouts alright but hey its just a favour. ;)
- PlanetGrafix0
Really good job.
I sent you a screenshot about the double scrollbar.
- cmy0
I was sub-contracted to do a site for a law firm. The lawyers were impossible to please and the project manager, who sub-contracted me, didn't have a clue as to how to control her client.
Result: I dissolved the aggreement. The worst two months of my life.
Personally, I won't touch a site for a lawyer unless I have an iron clad agreement and work one-on-one with them.
- cmy0
Yes, get paid.
- abizzyman0
damn fine job of feedback, folks.
I made a decision...
... I'm going to leave everything as is... because the attorney just sent about 15 more images to add to the site... plus WANTS THE WHOLE THING .pdf'ed...
... so - he gets what he gets.
Thanks all...
<~3
- endorphin0
I like: The design, the flash navigation, and the type.
I dislike: The Scrollbars, and some of the color.
I suggest: work on the mix between the flash movies that load with the text below it. The scoll bars attract too much attention.
Overall: Really good!
- ********0
Man, those pics ARE horrid - you should just meet with the lawyers, write up your hours spent so far(like a reverse bid) - include new photos in the reverse bid... then work something out with them.
that way you'll/they'll have a good site and you'll have a little $$
'favor' sites are the worst...
- abizzyman0
i managed to pull down $500 (laughing terribly to myself)... and I'm not in direct contact w/the attorney... I do however get emails from the attorney's assistant...
... and trust me - these are good photos of these guys (hehe)...
... but I don't think it's worth it to me to even give them feedback on the photos... I'm just going to let them stay sunburnt and fat - finish up and treat myself to half a new computer once I get paid.do attorneys pay promptly?
- shtuker0
I like it a lot.