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- gabe0
"mmmmmmmmmmm"
- jox0
really nice, the illustration is dope!. One thing though, I suggest you change the address font to something "easier".. it's a bit tricky to read, IMO but hey, it *could* be these glasses :)
- schjetne0
Hot Dang, that poster is SWEET!
- mayo0
I'd do something a little different with the hair. something a little more tame and along the lines of what Mucha kinda did. Other than that, i love it.
- useful_idiot0
i'm glad somebody knows the mucha... I like the frazzled war-torn hair... it's not apparent but the illustration sillhouette is in the form of a mushroom cloud
- Mal0
I like it and have no criticism to offer.
nice work.
- mrming0
I think the type at the top is sitting a bit uncomfortably - I'm not really sure where the visual focus is supposed to be. I'd make it small and bump your illustrated elements up to the top.
Also accentuate the mushroom cloudiness. Make it more obvious and it will have more impact.
Apart from that it's dope!
- nerdtech0
If you're after the alphonse mucha type thing, I'd give it a bit more line work. right now it is awesome, but still looks very vectory/Illustrator.
also, I'd tighten the whole thing up a bit, and try and give some weight to certain things. right now the whole thing looks very light, which I know is somewhat what you're after, but it needs some weight somewhere i think.sweet illustration though!
- useful_idiot0
thanks for the help!
- 4cY0
very, very nice.
although play more with thicker and thinner outlines if you really target that Muscha/Jugendstill effect.
other then that:
A!
- unknown0
Sweet illustration dude! nice work.
:P
- lemon7140
just out of curiosity how are you having this printed?
- useful_idiot0
it's being printed by www.jakprints.com ... I'm not paying and I know they get stuff out QUICK... around $500 for 500 custom-sized glossies