critique this logo
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- monkeyshine0
What's it for? My first thought is that its very Klimpt-like. If you have to make it tiny, its going to look like an ink blot.
- sauerbraten0
cool, though good logos should be readable at small sizes, don't think this would hold up.
- unknown0
I second the point of "when reduced, it will become mush."
The only other critique I have is based on variety. It looks as though you used the same figure for all of the "e" letters. My 2 cents would say to vary the letterforms so that every one has its own unique character.
Your aim in this is organic. By repeating the same figure over and over, it becomes patterned and unnatural.
bB
- monoblanco0
thank you for some bitchin feedback.
this is supposed to be based on Henry Matisse's collage Blue Nude:
http://www.mystudios.com/art/mod…
it's not finished work yet.
still pulling points.No mayor problems when printing small.
- kodap0
If you don't mind to say what kind of company/client is it for, may be easier to give you more input than what was said before.
I guess no one 'bitched' with you...
- ********0
looks spacey
- unknown0
Back to the drawingboard; homes.
There are some rules to be held in logodesign:
Know them, breake them, know them again.
- ********0
doesnt look like a logo.
sorry