Feedback please
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- Focker
It's a 4x6 flyer front and back.
- sherman0
i like it.
it may need a bit more text on the cover to give it some more depth. but other then that its super clear
- piperboytoy0
looks good, like the typeface and layout is clean.
- ********0
nice work :)
- Focker0
Thanks. Do you think there's too much white space on the red one? also on the back is the info on the lower right too high?
- Focker0
anyone?
- monkeyshine0
Looks good. I think there's too much white space on the front...what's your reasoning behind that? I'd also suggest making the FLIRT text on the inside bigger but maybe that's just me. My eye keeps going back to the 2AM that sticks out.
- sauerbraten0
nice type work
- piperboytoy0
yes there's too much white space in the front. I'd take out that what bar and make the whole thing red with the white image and flirt.
Also make the Flirt red on the other side, bump up the font size of flirt. This will make it stand out more as everything seems to blend.
You should even lower all the copy down closer to the bottom of the page and have more space at the top. Also decrease the font size of the bottom copy. You can even make the bottom stuff the same size.
good stuff
- ********0
like the retro look to it