site crit pls.
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- derrickito0
nice! long time no see mr ctrlZ. good to see you still around:)
the main thing that I didnt like was the fact that you popped a new window on me. why not load this flash piece into the same browser window? i didnt see a need for a _new on there
also on your portfolio samples.. the small boxes are super tiny. i realize you are trying to organize and load in alot of content.. but how about next, previous on those so someone can click through with one button maybe?
over all i like what you've done. just some little things that i saw!
cheers
- Bluejam0
You should add some words within your portfolio. Some of the work speaks for itself but in the sections such as digital image and photography the work lacks some description. ideas behind the work..etc. It would add depth to your portfolio and persuade teh viewer to take some time in between pieces rather than click..click...click...
- Ctrl_Z0
thanks derrickito,
I do plan on adding to the image loads with next buttons, but for the folio pieces. example: branding..logo, bus card, letterhead, etc. just have filler crap for now. =)agree with _new window...it's as good as gone. thanks for showing me the light.
- blastofv0
nice work— and I dig that brown color palette. Only issue for me was with the main nav system: had to click through before I knew where it was taking me... a bit vague in that one regard, but that's a cool looking site.
- Ctrl_Z0
will do Bluejam.
thanks, I know just how to make that happen. thinking of adding the descriptions via the next buttons within the image loads.
- Ctrl_Z0
I agree blastofv, I thought I had a fix for that. did you try mousing over the "man" area where the buttons are not?
- blastofv0
oh yeah— that solves it... although it creeps in kind of slowly— and only if the mouse lingers, right? I must have rolled the curser through too quickly.
- Ctrl_Z0
yeah slow, will speed it up.
it's about a 1.5 or so delay.
I fear that is an internet minute
- blastofv0
ya mon— that's an internet eternity! Nice work though
- Ctrl_Z0
I just took out a chunk of frames from the mouse over.
hope that did it.
- blastofv0
yeah, that makes a bid difference... one more suggestion: can it call up that movie clip when you roll over [and stay over] the buttons? I think that's what I did the first time. I rolled over the circular button and waited for some info on where it would take me...
- abba_cadaver0
Nice site my only issue with it and this is so very miniscule and maybe only in my head but I hit the head and expected to see you portfolio work. I would imaging your work would be from your head and your school would be in your pocket (money)
see i told you super small and nit pickey
- piperboytoy0
loving it!
- corin0
hell yeah thats def dude... my only problem is the need to interact with the dots b4 you know what they are
- Ctrl_Z0
thanks guys, all valid points.
I did have mouse over sounds with super funky robo-voice. on mouse over it would call out the link, but for cheese factor and file size reasons I chose not to go with it. I might have to rethink that tho since this feedback.
thanks again guys!
- unknown0
Good tight design; colors an d all. Forget those "sounds", I hate noise.
- derrickito0
theres a definate difference between audio used well and just plain old "noise"
:)
- unknown0
Well, read between the lines and get rid of the GOD DAMN noise
- Ctrl_Z0
haha
- neeko0
Looks super.
really nice work _Z.
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time and date text looks a little off to me... not embedded?