have to win her back
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- kote
yo - proof this copy and give me some feedback will you? this girl is special to me, and I have to win her back.
this is what I want to put in the card I am designing...
= =the long version:
My heart jumps when I see her
so beautiful there are no words for her
only awe, only the glimmer in my eyes
her beauty a mere glimpse of her true self
Love surrounds her, she brings out my heart
There is nothing more precious to me
nothing I wouldn't give to have her by my side
nothing I wouldn't do to show her my soul
to give her my all, to make her believe in me again
she completes me - I live to see her again
She forever is my princess...and then the shorter version:
My heart jumps when I see her
there are no words for her beauty,
merely echoed by her physical self
her love surrounds us, unravels my true heart
there is nothing more precious to me
She is forever my princess...so? feedback?
- unknown0
kote, one advice, dude DON`T DO IT!!!!
I don´t know how old you are or how much experience you have with the ladies; but this is not the right thing to do. It´s clear to everyone here at NT that you are in deep and hurting and all that, but I´m talking from the heart here; don´t go there,man.
Take some time, think everything trough, do normal stuff, cry like a baby. She´s still there in a few weeks, doing tha same old stuff she did last week, she´s not going to the moon forever is she?
Breathe; god damn it!!
- shant0
dude, you know who writes poetry like that?
that cheesy contestant from the bachelorette.
don't be that guy.
- unknown0
get a life...
- stretch1160
smoke a bong dude, ponder and rethink.
Chill!
- sexypixel0
Why dont you be honest
"My crotch lumps when I see her
so boobyful there are no words for her
only awe, only the glimmer in my japs-eyes
her beauty a mere glimpse of her true nakedness
Love surrounds her, she brings out my love muscle
There is nothing more precious to me
nothing I wouldn't give to have her in my bed
nothing I wouldn't do to show her my lump"word of advice.. women hate deperate men.
best of luck
- unknown0
fuck
- petzi0
don't do it now. put the card away and take some time out the next week. let you AND her breathe
- specta_d0
I broke up with my girl lately and I know it's tough but I also know that if I was writing her shit like this she would not want to see me again.
Make sure she knows how you feel about it but don't go suckin up like a freckin fag, they don't like that !
- kote0
thats good advice guys. thanks for the support. I am not sending anything to her until the end of next week. I have to send something though - I screwed up, and I want her to know that I am still here. Just want her to think about it, and I want to stay top of mind.
I think I will keep it short and to the point though - thanks for the feedback.
- petzi0
good decision. i wish u the best luck!
- unknown0
you never cease to amaze me kote.
if you send something like that shes gonna be calling the cheese police, or a bodyguard at least.. seriously though, you'll just sound like a depressing loser with that kinda shit. no offence mind.
- kote0
I agree. not sending that stuff to her.
- unknown0
sorry, kote, but I have to agree on rasko. As I said a while back;
Do as in that Prodigy-tune and BREATHE.
Get some of those gots back in you, uinstead of letting it all out.Next week?? Not if you feel like you do now, dude.
I was sat in a park with a letter sounding like your shit and I showed it to a friend of mine. He looked at me, took the letter, went down to a pond and fed it to the ducks; fuckers ate it all. I never looked back after that day and neither did the chosen girl. So it´s all in balance.
- unknown0
save that crap for valentines day when your in a relationship... the way to win a girl back or impress a girl is to open your trap and talk to her and be honest and be a man.
Girls dont want sissy stuff. they want a guy who can take charge and be exciting and just be a man... they want a guy to take them on a life adventure and then flip them over and do them ... girls want the romance too but dont loose Your "Wild at Heart" or the girl will loose you... or not take you back..
You gotta get some balls and be a man and Talk to him and be straight up real and just be cool.
Screw the hallmark until her birthday comesaround and you are laying next to her naked in bed... until them be the Man not the woman
- kote0
you guys rock. tottally right.
- unknown0
I´m telling you; they ate the whole letter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- kote0
Jagd - did you get her back? If so, how?
- unknown0
That´s not the point here, I think. Or read my previous piece.
- unknown0
amen qbert
- unknown0
If you guys want to read a great great book about being a man read this >>>
http://www.amazon.com/exec/obido…It does have religion in it.. but the underlying messege of it is amazing and hits the nail on the head of what it really means to be a man. It is the best book I have ever read.