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- Mick
Very much an under construction... waiting on pics, copy and content from the client. Feedback appreciated on the general design, etc. I have lots of flexability with this one, client is very care free :)
http://www.clubsaturdays.com/ind…
Still a photo gallery, drinks menu, and directions page to be added in the nav.
- Nirvous0
You might want to warn people that the contact button will open their email program. AArg.
Use a form instead...it is more functional and people tend to use it more often. What if I'm on a guest computer.....then I have to explain why you should not to reply back etc etc.
- Mick0
I will be added a contact section with form, phone, etc.
I just threw the mailto link in for now.
- HyCaliber0
I like the martini glass. Good work!
- Bluejam0
I like the design.
Homepage - not too sure about using the same typeface ( as the header 'saturdays') for the words 'only'...it's placing emphasis on the wrong parts of the copy. I'd increase the size of the words...
'at the Sports club/Irvine' and 'Saturdays from 7 till 2'...this is important info that needs to stand out. Maybe same typeface as the header? (readibility is an issue so i can why you stuck with that typeface).Also the homepage seems 'empty'...the animation for the cocktail is spot on...what about a background silohette of people to dancing/drinking to promote the feel of busy/fun...etc.
Otherwise, good job.
- Mick0
Thanx, it's vector artwork created in Illustrator - I used it to make this poster...
- piperboytoy0
yes the martini glass is really good, the design is classy good stuff.
- Mick0
Thanks - good points, perhaps I should keep the "only" text in the same proportion as the poster
It doesn't look so bad on the poster. It is their signature tagline "only saturdays, only at sportsclub"Thanks for the suggestions though, I'll play with it.
- robotron3k0
i like it, the glass is nice, would love to see it throughout the site on the upper right corner(cause it's worth seeing again), not sure yet on the typography, i agree that maybe you want to leave the type for the logo, just for the logo and address all the other type in a dif. way so that is stands out better, the body type seems a bit hard on the eyes, consider maybe a sans serif font as default, overall it looks classy and appropriate for the clientel... just some thoughts...
- ********0
niice!
do something about the background tho,.....black is soo....hmm.... black.
add a gradient or sumthin'
- Mick0
Whatcha think about this BG?
http://www.clubsaturdays.com/ind…Better than black?
- freshmode0
I think the site looks good. Good work.
I don't like the fact that the actuall site looks like a flyer. Because of the background it looks as if it was just placed their. I don't like the new background. But black isn't the way to go either.
It seems as if you are using 3 or even 4 fonts? I would lose the italics and 1 font.
Overall, pretty good. But everything always has room for improvement.
Keep up the good work.
FRESH!