Danski needs feedback
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- Danski
Hola guys and girls,
Been working on a project called MyPlayground. For those of you that didn't see the first issue :
It's based around the premise that the simple act of using a skateboard alters the way in which you parse your immediate surroundings. People become obstacles, walls become exclusive travel routes.
Issue 2 at
Let me know what you think, We're still trying to feel the idea out properly.
- unknown0
i only looked at the secone one.
its a nice idea but I dont like your treatment of it - way too brash and 'naff', looks like some kinda cutout and play game off the back of a cereal box, and the fact that people just dont do handplants off walls like that and the guy doing a kick flip looks more like he's learning to do a stand still ollie fails to convince and adds to the overall fakeness.
the idea is promising, tghe styling needs a rethink. imo.
- Danski0
Sounds fair enough. Thanks for being honest.
- 4cY0
I like it a lot. It's fresh&funky. I don't know shit about skateboarding tho....
But these png's are VERY large...are they meant for print?
- Danski0
Yeah meant for large format print - the screen isn't all that complimentary i know
- mrdobolina0
danski, number one is executed nicely, number two needs some work, its kindof confusing.
- thecrab0
It looks good.
It would make a cool big poster.
- piperboytoy0
niceski
ALthough the illustration could use some refinement.
- Bio0
mmm did someone say large format print? my specialty. haha.
do lemme know if you need a printer for that. i can hook you up.
seen that before. love it. nice colors. i dig the "almost cut-out" feel. hot.
- jox0
wow, that's some really nice stuff! Good job man!
One thing though, on the second one, the cars' wheels are on the wrong side!!
:P
- Danski0
Thanks bio, I might just tap you up for that printhouse expertise once i've sorted out all these damned bugs in the design itself.
- mayo0
i couldn't open the first one Danski. something about "no midgets allowed" or "MIME"
- mrdobolina0
there was a mime trapped in a box.
- enobrev0
damned mimes...
dan, LOVE the first one... the second one is cool, but it just doesn't feel as good as numero uno.