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- unknown
Please could i have some critique on this. bit stuck at the mo.
Use comma and period to navigate through the layout sections.
cheers.
- BonSeff0
layout is simple and clean.
navigation is wack though, its not going to be ., when its developed is it?
looks good though
- propa0
I think i like it. The morph at the intro is a little off but the rest is nice.
- unknown0
no nav yet. just layout.
thanks.
- Biofreak0
you may wanna work on that photo a little bit.
it is a bit rough for the style layout you're using.
work on the levels and maybe the saturation a bit. nice colors.
also when the photo is expanded all the way out, i think the abrupt corners bother me, but im not sure what would work better without playing with it.
it is looking nice though. id like to see the final. =)
nav is... odd. not sure if i like or not. but it is "different".
- unknown0
BUMP I
- rasp0
personally id clean up the type/layout a little more. its up to u tho.
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- rasp0
i just thought it would be better to range the columns off the 'open' logo rather than the edge of the picture. maybe reduce the size of the section headers so [maybe even slightly] smaller than the open logo itself
- unknown0
thanks rasp.
did start smaller, but i kinda need all the space i can get. its already 800px wide. If i were to make it smaller i'd only be getting 3-5 words per line and that's too little if you want people to read it.did you look at the other layouts using COMMA and PERIOD?
- rasp0
yep had a look, see what u think. ive gotta dash
- phlojonaut0
i like the color scheme, i don't mind the font, the layout is decent, but one thing that bugs me is the rounded corners of that header picture.... and that is because i don't feel the connection between that header and anything else...
especially look at the way the category titles are ligned up underneath.... they make the composition look offbalance (because of the rounded corners)...
try making the rounding 20% of the size it is now... maybe even 10%... make it as small as the pieces in the logog.... mmaybe play off those poeces more... use them more in the design...peace
- unknown0
the round corners come from the logo (as in the intro) so making them small would break away from that.
Font is identity font(A.Guard) and system font verdana(a lot of php/my sql to be used)
thanks.
- unknown0
just realised i didn't have the proper version up. this one has the intr thingy.