Hit me! Feedback/advice
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- Louno
Hi
(sorry for those who already read this )i need some feedback/advice badly hehe check this
, its a new contract and i have to show a demo tomorrow or after tomorrow .
i swear im really sucking , ive been trying to do it for 2 days but i always make shit and keep starting over , i swear this is like my 6th try .. i dont know whats wrong with me im really scared , this never happened to me , usualy i just open photoshop and it comes naturaly ...
anyways so i think this is my "best" try so far , should i continu or scrap and start over again , i know its not very advanced but the navigation would be on the left , content on the right , didnt want to continu it cuz i dont know if its worth it...
im getting desesperate , but give me honest answer.
thx alot ...
- bent0
that's clean if ya ask me. One thing, the background floral print is wrapping vertically. One thing I would do and this is just a preference would be somehow detract from the repeating bacground. Maybe lower it's opacity, maybe do a custom floral montage in a minimalist vein. Just some I D E A S.
- Louno0
cool thanks , ill definitively lower opacity !
- ********0
bent said it.
bg is a bit heavy...
other then that, luvlee....
- Louno0
ok i have shown this to 2 ppl on my msn list that are noob designers like me , and they dont like it , so either them or either u guys are lying ! hehe
im really not sure anymore damn it ... i think its ok ,but again ive been sucking alot lately and d argh...
i dunno what to do ... i need some sleep , ill check replies tomorow ....
- bent0
What's it for anyway?
- Louno0
its for a woman who has a small decoration compagnie , ( they put flowers and nice paint color on walls and stuff ... ) kinda like an interior designer ...
ok now im in bed for real.
- stephen_pc0
you know what would be cool is have multiple wallpaper with different contrasting colors in stead of one solid blue one.
- bent0
think about some sexy girl you know for awhile. . . it'll come to you. Sexy.
- Louno0
?multiplewall ? ... anyone else ?
- eloosive0
I think its nice and clean. Stop being unsure of yourself. When I get that way sometimes, I look at my past work that folks have liked, that I've done well. And it reaffirms my confidence. Try that. Now, knock it off. If you see your client, they'll be able to catch on to that insecurity and you won't want that. Looks good to me, and apparently to folks here, so really, there's no problem.
- Nairn0
I quite like it - it seems apt for its purpose. Thing with these things is that it's hard to make a reasonable comment without seeing how the content and navigation integrate.
Don't berate yourself - it's easy to start thinking too much when confusion sets in..!
- mbr0
I like it too. The bg idea seemed pretty cool, it could create a bunch of different moods for it, which would seem relevant to your clients work (pretty flowers). The sexy idea could be good, too. Maybe integrate some smooth, subtle transistions. That 2A site http://www.seasonsrecordings.com…
is a personal fav. Smooth and soft.
- k0na_an0k0
not going to read everyone elses post. this is my first impression.
it's nice. but...
tone down the flowers in the background to blend more with the blue background color. make them visible but barely. you don't want to take the viewers eye away or distract it from the main window.
also, center the window in on the screen and tile the background around it. you have something really nice started and i'd like to see it finished.
i'm digging the color scheme also and the potential for a nice horizontal sliding animation for displaying text or photos or whatever is there. nice work my friend.
- CAJTBr0
why not throw some fake nav & content onto it to see how it looks? hard to tell with it just like that.
it doesn't fit 800x600, are you sure she wants 1024?
- mrming0
As eloosive says, it's all about having confidence in your ideas. Get away from the computer, forget about it for a couple of hours and it will come to you. You can't sell an idea to a client that you don't believe in yourself. Once you've had a good idea and you know it will work, stick to your guns and see it through to a kick ass execution!
- robotron3k0
give it a concept...
i like the start of your design as it looks appropriate for the clients business specialty.
you can get lot's of advice on how to make it look better, and lot's of it can be good, the one thing that will sell this to your client will be the "concept" behind your design/ia decisions... if you can wrap an thoughtful concept about what your trying to get across, your design will be bulletproof...!keep on truckin'