<-- Five Miles Out
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- unknown
What do you think of this song? We made it in about two hours. The theme of the tune is about a guy who went to meet his wife at the airport and the plane goes down and he is thinking about being without her before and after the crash.
- unknown0
link?
- swollenelbow0
not bad...i imagine, semi soft whispers of a woman saying things like "i remember when..." and "the things you said..." you know...can't you?
- unknown0
yeah exactly man! I tried to talk mu buddy into adding some of that, yet didn't even someone talking in the background. This needs much work, but some parts are on the dial, violin strings work well.
- swollenelbow0
it's good tho...i like it. i would def. take it in other directions. what are you using to make this?
- unknown0
Nord Modular Synth w/ keyboard, Reason 2.0, Sound Forge 6.0, 4 different kinds of mics (pro ones), Roland MC-909 Groovebox, Phat Boy MIDI controller, Edirol MIDI keyboard, Digitech Vocalist Workstation EX. Some other small things as well. It's lots of fun though!
- unknown0
thanks man, it needs major work though, your right. Resequenced and remixed as well for perfection of timing. Basically means to quantize the notes in Reason. It perfects it for you without having to do a thing. Hee hee :)
- rd110
it's definitely cool. a little bit
Reason-y , but it's clean.
- unknown0
too much MIDI sounding now, for sure, fake sounding, we'll clean it up for warm analog appeal.
- swollenelbow0
just heard it again...=)
that's a lot of software. you should post when you've made some changes, i'd like to hear what else you came up with.
gotta git to bed now.
- unknown0
ok dude thanks, I am not really a jerk everyone, I post too much when drunk hee hee
- unknown0
the kiss of death... when someone asks you what you used to make your art rather than commenting on it...
it's got an eighties feel to it. I had to fast forward to about 2:40 to get to the point. too long of an intro. voice is not too bad. a lil 80's retro etc. play up the 80's. get that beat mor eminimal or something...
freak it out a lil.
- unknown0
yep your right on both comments, front end is too long and does nothing, Hmmm, vocals need work and more of them as well as better beat. Thanks man
- unknown0
well thats what the lyrics mean: "Five Miles In, Five Miles Out, So far away from you."
- quamb0
haha yeah i dig it!! at first was really dissapointed, though once the singing starts- oh yeah! ACE!
agreed with lilbaby
the chorus is the best part, the intro and bridge seem to drag, needs some bad tick tick tick snare rolls! you know, the ones where you shake both fists and smile.
need more... do you have a html page linking up all your mp3s?
- jevad0
synth-tastic!
Pretty sad too - don;t like the subject matter much at all - but the song is great!
- kodap0
really nice
- unknown0
http://www.machvinyl.com and thanks guys
- unknown0
the new song isn't there you will have to search under Five Miles Out next door or download/stream from here http://www.machnewmedia.com/down…
- unknown0
thanks I know it's a weird subject