CRITIQUE IT again(3)
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- abizzyman
Still working on this... added more interactivity etc... still needs tweeking... any thoughts?
- abizzyman0
(yawn) bump!
- IloveQBN0
it looks good, but the there are vertical and horizontal scroll bars in the big image.
I like how the title on the bottom appears very nice.
I think there are too much animatioon going on. It would be nice to have just one ani. More subtle will be more powerful.
it's a good start.
- lovaboy0
if the pic of the scary-looking girl is just a placeholder for the main content, let's see what it looks like w/ some content in there. also, i feel pretty strongly that the monochrome color scheme is NOT the best approach in this case. also kind of iffy about the placement of the buttons - they make the composition a bit too bottom heavy. how would they look below the top bar? otherwise it's fine.
- abizzyman0
thanks for the honesty kidz... I agree... it's a bit bottom heavy at the moment... but yeah... she's just a place holder for the moment...
... that is the main content section... soon to be full of neat trinkets and lovely graphics.
later
- majman0
i also agree w/ lovaboy about it being a little bottom heavy, but i do like your roll overs, the transparent white that comes up, i dont' think it's too much animation, it's relatively subtle. i think if you probably get away w/ chopping a good portion of the bottom nav buttons off.
also like what happens when you click. i also feel like it's a little too much blue, probably b/c of the main image. just my thoughs