Logo opinion :)
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- Louno
Hi ,
Ok a few days ago i posted asking about how you guys presented logos , i decided to make a small real quick flash presentation , I know the logo arent very nice thats why i needed a nicer presentation ... i didnt have much ideal for the logo and its the real first logo i do for someone else , i did other logos but always for personal or friend stuff , so anyways ... check this out : http://www.louno.com/exact/ . i have to show this today.Hope she will like it.
thanks
- kodap0
looks nice and eyecatching, but i guess you could add some descriptions, i think the purpose of a dynamic presentation like this one loses meaning if the content has no words on it...
- neeko0
looks good.
the text is being cut off in the bottom left corner though... text box needs to be longer.
- IloveQBN0
the way you label the logos is a bit confusing. I think you shouldn't present that many options. Especially color variations. 1.3 and 5.c are the cleanest looking ones, and will look good when shrunk down.
- Louno0
ure probably right :/
Im just not very good with "bla-bla" ill try to come up with 1or 2 line for each diff logo !
- pr20
the logos are very whitish compared to the rest... but then again i'm using old monitor whit absolotely wrong color setup...
- quamb0
i like the house logo, though with the swirly circle thingies its a bit over kill.
though nice colours and typeface! good job!
(the mentioned idea of a description is good too)
- unknown0
it would be nice if you presented each logo very small and a large size, to compare. thats what i do with my clients.
also, black and white vs color is also good.
if it were me, id show large, small, color, b&w
- Louno0
Ok good idea ill work do that , ill upload it in 15 min or so
- unknown0
5
get rid of the useless circles....hate them...
- nosaj0
I'm with 3c I think #5 stands out from the pack.
I am a little confused as to why you're building an elaborate flash presentation for logo's that you aren't completely pleased with. Ditch the Flash and spend the time on the logo's. Print them out each one on a different sheet of paper without any text (a small and a large version of the same logo on each page). If you need it to be online, just put them in simple html pages. Keep it clean and don't distract for the logo's with a Flash interface.... just my 2cents.
- _nando0
3.0 and the Misc one with the E on the house's wall.
Looks awesome.
- Louno0
The flash was already built i just had to copy paste from illustrator so that was pretty quick.
the logos i really didnt have very good ideal and time to make it better , but the client is the type of person who is easely wowed by anything that is flash , she showed me stuff that because were made if flash she found very cool , but they sucked big time .
So anyways , as i said , if i did maybe a presentation that is nicer than just a cd with a few jpeg on it , thats why i used flash.So anyways the flash really isnt that elaborated cuz i just took one of my old stuff and changed the text and image was very quickly done.
- nosaj0
My bad.... I thought you were focusing too much time ont he presentation as opposed to the project. If you alread had it built, then good stuff...
I quite like the house icon with the E turned on it's side. I think the circles, swooshes and repetition of the icon make it uneccasarily complicated. Logo 5 is looking really good, I would maybe even try simplifying a bit more. If you were to remove the chiminey and make roof grey I think the E would really stand out more. ... my 4 cents