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- kbags0
Hey dude, MUCH better! The line around Lately works, but I'm not so sure about the yellow...but that's me. Maybe grey?
Overall, I think it's a good, positive step...definitely more professional and organized.
I'd get rid of the "...probably quite silly" because it reflects poorly. Not to say you can't be silly and playful, but let me liken it to trying to spark a conversation with a girl in a bar:
"Hey, yeah, you probably don't want to talk to me, but let me buy you a drink."
versus
"Shot o tequilla and a ride to funkytown, anyone? Yeah i'm talkin to you."
Of course, it has to be the right girl (agency)...and if not at the beginning of the night, then later when she has exhausted some other options (candidates).
Cheers.