website crit
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- instantok0
yeah a more prominent grid would help...a stronger typographical hierarchy will also help...a couple of horizontal / vertical rules or bg colors could help define areas of the site...
are you eliminating "my broken shoe" and creating one portfolio? i think that is probably the way to go...making a clear distinction between the design and illustration sections of your folio will help...the tiny screenshot of the website in the "lately" section looks out of place and the size diminishes the value of the image...the navigation (view at once or one at a time) should be more intuitive than needing all that text to describe the interaction...create a clearer navigational structure...
btw. awesome illustration work...my broken shoe may serve as a good starting point for the design of this folio