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    hello dan_dan_dan

    "see three elements that stand alone vs. coming together to communicate something about the organization."

    yes I think your right. the text does seem to 'fight' each other.
    It is always my weak point. Will go back to the drawing board, though i do do like clarendon.

    And the colours, Again the green would throw it off totally. Will have to work on them, still not sure whether to use colour.

    Your point about the "climate" & "action" seem to be to general concencus so i will take it out.

    "Is that your illustration work at My Broken Shoe? Excellent Work! I enjoy your illustration."

    Thaks. Yep tonight i am one of my alter ego's - a designer, normally i am a illustrator
    :)

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