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- uncle_helv0
It's hardly a site, all I can do is download a pdf, non?!
I agree with peteski lose the quote and the tagline.
That font for the company name is awful, very clumsy epsecially the e, s and n, I'd advise not to use a typeface with more emphasis on style than legibility, do you really want to communicate a lack of clarity? But having read your CV why the company name if you're looking for work at a design agency?
The pdf aint screaming to be read either, try splitting it into pages instead of one very long document. But on reading the CV, I believe you don't want to appear desperate or even pigeon hole yourself, so don't give an objective or desired postion.
I could go on but then it sounds like I'm having a go at you, but you did ask for a crit and I'm being as honest and constructive as I can.
Keep it simple.
Good luck
:)