@ Portfolio Update
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- chilaquil0
Don't take my comments too seriously.
I had no problem with the site loading. there must've been a problem with the server when other people were trying to see it.
You wanted feedback on the work itself, right? Well, I mean, it's not bad, but nothing there made me wish I had designed it really. I liked the T shirt for whip, with the chick with the whip. That was sort of clever. Some of the websites looked nice. That is probably the strongest point of your portfolio IMHO. Identities are probably the weakest one. That Nickerson Page logo made me remember this article...http://www.splorp.com/critique/
Well, it's not really an article, but just someone showing the redundancy and overuse of certain elements. I think your @ logo might've been a good idea in 94, but that has been so over used and used poorly, that it has become a cliché. It's not your fault, but you got to adapt to the circumstances.
Anyway, hope it helps in a good way. Not that my opinion has any weight...