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  • fate0

    Thanks instantok. I guess my attempt to work it into a bigger picture is using the photographs of smoke seen in the intro and sub-sections. I suppose I want to kill even those because I feel the photographs are a lame excuse for replacing real design and focus, as well as bloating file size. But oh well.

    About the logo, I sort of feel the contrast between bold angles and smoke plays well, not to mention that if I change the font then I change the smoke shape.

    I had some ideas for a logo...a Gothic Typeface one, some more variations of angles and stuff...none seemed to work as well as the current one. Maybe I'll post up some others for a crit in a bit.

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