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Out of context: Reply #20

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  • instantok0

    i agree that your logo is very athletic...with a name like fate it should be easy to come up with something whimsical that could reference the smoke animation...

    if you want to show off the smoke jam then why not make a few more for main nav rollovers and subnavigation...

    i guess what i'm thinking is that if you don't go balls out with the smoke and have some sort of bigger picture that it integrates with that it will be reduced to eye candy, which, in an otherwise very minimal site sticks out...especially since it is a single animation repeated...it's evident that it was a trick just picked up

    the footer line (the one above the copyright etc.) looks weird being wider than the main body of the site...i think you can lose it altogether and just right align it under the body...

    whoa...that was long...i wouldn't have so much to say if i didn't think it had potential

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