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• iDp0

  yeah I'd dump the lorem. I get what you are trying to do with it, but lets say you are lookng for a job and a creative director looks at your site. The first thing I think of when I see good ol' Lorem is 'unfinsihed'. Maybe come up with a ficticious passage, or find a really good quote and do the same thing that you are doing now, highlight the words you want to have reveal themselves as yuor links.

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