New SteveCarty.com
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couple comments...
- is that impact? i think trade gothic works for you well carty... + its been your brand for a while. and if you decide to keep this new typeface though, you should take a look at your kerning (its way too tight, and there is no balance. tip- when you're kerning your letters, you want the negative space between each letter to create a sort of harmonious balance.. if you notice now they all look cramped together.)
- the shot selection seems to be all over the place... i liked that about your last website, you had defined sections. and this a totally personal thing, but i feel as though some of the shots you've chosen don't belong on your website... i think you should really try and have nothing put your best work up there... where are the radiohead shots for example? those were easily my fav shots of yours [ever].. truly iconic. but now you have stuff like this:
http://www.stevecarty.com/27.htm…
http://www.stevecarty.com/31.htm…... and it just seems out of place.
hope i didn't come off harshly, all these comments are purely constructive critism!